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Nov 10, 2008 18:56:58 GMT -5
Post by whiterosebliss on Nov 10, 2008 18:56:58 GMT -5
This desire burns, this longing is deep as the deep blue sea.
I feel the surge of energy flowing, slow and easy, yet pushing through me.
Screams of sweet thoughts, images that dissolve through the walls, travelling through my veins.
Events that make me feel, somewhere between the sun and moon, and I can feel the zodiac signs shift while his name is emblazoned in the center.
I feel his hand reach and touch me, which leaves me with an understanding, that love is the highest tower, in which Zen calls the Ultimate Core.
In the heart of the crater, beats my heart. A river that runs through me, colliding into one massive entity, where love becomes one.
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coco
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Nov 10, 2008 20:48:38 GMT -5
Post by coco on Nov 10, 2008 20:48:38 GMT -5
Amazing... This is very, very beautiful and I thank you for sharing this with us. You are blessed to have that love in your life. There was another poem I saw earlier that I wanted to comment on and I didn't get a chance to and now it's gone. I just want to wish them the very best.
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Nov 10, 2008 21:19:01 GMT -5
Post by Hermit on Nov 10, 2008 21:19:01 GMT -5
This is beyond amazing. Great job whiterose. You have great accuracy with your words.
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Nov 11, 2008 19:22:24 GMT -5
Post by GLORIA gloria on Nov 11, 2008 19:22:24 GMT -5
that was truly beautiful. what great writting style. it's very deep and touching. be proud.
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Nov 11, 2008 19:36:13 GMT -5
Post by Constance on Nov 11, 2008 19:36:13 GMT -5
This gets more confusing by the minute. But there are no words to describe the beauty of this poem.
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Nov 12, 2008 6:39:26 GMT -5
Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Nov 12, 2008 6:39:26 GMT -5
Very cool to read. Nice work as always
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Nov 12, 2008 10:43:15 GMT -5
Post by Hermit on Nov 12, 2008 10:43:15 GMT -5
Personally I like starting with the feet.
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