Post by whiterosebliss on Oct 14, 2008 18:02:21 GMT -5
I want to apologize to John, as I heard about the title of his new solo stuff, but never read any of the threads on them until today. I am so sorry for writing this piece and leaving the feeling like I am taking away from his work, as I would never want to do that. I had no idea. I accidentally came across that comedy piece, while looking at other poetist work. John, I really apologize if this piece I wrote was offensive in any kind of way, I never knew, and I am removing my piece in honoring you. I hope you accept my apologies, sincerely from the bottom of my heart, because I don't want the impression nor feeling of me taking away from anyone's writings, even though I know most times we are inspired by one another. This was not done intentionally and I hope you know that. And I hope you can accept my apologies.
[glow=red,2,300]Dante by Me[/glow]
Water that moves and soothes
the fire inside my soul.
Content movement,
bursting through the fears.
Shadows that pass through me,
a chill that makes me shiver,
somehow always makes me feel warmth,
beyond the shadows of doubt.
Forever roaming in an eternal place,
sometimes lost, but often times finding our way.
Although somehow feel like you are going in circles,
nowhere fast.
Whatever time, I shall make it through.
My love, how I adore you in the most beautiful way possible,
but can you love me the way that I love you.
Beyond the grey, beyond the black,
feeling how the night moves.
How the light shines through,
the prism hues.
So no matter how far apart,
the sense of touch is always there.
Like the smell of beauty that lingers around,
the being you are.
You breathe gale into my lungs,
which brings me to life.
And as I allow the freedom to be,
our hearts beat the same tune.
A rythmn, a passion so divine,
how it fills all the way to the very core.
Then, only then will colors fill our life through,
the ends of our time.
A side note:
This was based on a comedy, written by Dante Alighieri. Who is an Italian Poet and the name of the comedy was "Divine Comedy" and developed between 1265-1321 timeframe. A man, who loves a woman so dear, which passed away before her time. She asked the powers that be, to guide him through a journey in order to understand his ways and to teach him how to be a better man so to speak. At least this was I got from reading it, and I know there is more to it and am going to read about it more bcuz it touches me in so many ways. Anyway, this was from my point of view and I've just started learning about it and I feel it comes from a very passionate/compassionate standpoint, too.
[glow=red,2,300]Dante by Me[/glow]
Water that moves and soothes
the fire inside my soul.
Content movement,
bursting through the fears.
Shadows that pass through me,
a chill that makes me shiver,
somehow always makes me feel warmth,
beyond the shadows of doubt.
Forever roaming in an eternal place,
sometimes lost, but often times finding our way.
Although somehow feel like you are going in circles,
nowhere fast.
Whatever time, I shall make it through.
My love, how I adore you in the most beautiful way possible,
but can you love me the way that I love you.
Beyond the grey, beyond the black,
feeling how the night moves.
How the light shines through,
the prism hues.
So no matter how far apart,
the sense of touch is always there.
Like the smell of beauty that lingers around,
the being you are.
You breathe gale into my lungs,
which brings me to life.
And as I allow the freedom to be,
our hearts beat the same tune.
A rythmn, a passion so divine,
how it fills all the way to the very core.
Then, only then will colors fill our life through,
the ends of our time.
A side note:
This was based on a comedy, written by Dante Alighieri. Who is an Italian Poet and the name of the comedy was "Divine Comedy" and developed between 1265-1321 timeframe. A man, who loves a woman so dear, which passed away before her time. She asked the powers that be, to guide him through a journey in order to understand his ways and to teach him how to be a better man so to speak. At least this was I got from reading it, and I know there is more to it and am going to read about it more bcuz it touches me in so many ways. Anyway, this was from my point of view and I've just started learning about it and I feel it comes from a very passionate/compassionate standpoint, too.