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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Apr 21, 2005 13:30:00 GMT -5
This song is only wishful thinking That you won't hate me Go drown your pretty face in tears then restart and please forgive me
I never was one for love It was only ever wishful thinking I know you think you've found it But loving me was only wishful thinking I thought maybe no one would care Another example of my wishful thinking But they did, they always will Only ever wishful thinking, our wishful thinking
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And this is all my fault Since Day one i knew But I never stopped you And now it's all I can do To smile when you say I love you And cry every day I don't tell you.
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Post by finscar on Apr 22, 2005 2:25:18 GMT -5
very good, i like it a lot. i feel very much related to to your song. you make it very easy to put it down to words. very good.
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RHcp
Freaks Of A Feather
naked we come and bruised we go
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Post by RHcp on Apr 22, 2005 4:39:33 GMT -5
Wow, that was good And now it's all I can do To smile when you say I love you And cry every day I don't tell you. I like those lines, they're really nice great job
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Apr 22, 2005 11:09:33 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by Silverhair on Apr 23, 2005 16:03:07 GMT -5
It's beautiful Emma
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Apr 24, 2005 16:33:03 GMT -5
That's lovely honey.
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Apr 25, 2005 7:56:41 GMT -5
It's good, but I still think you need to expand and try and build some variety instead of writing about the same subject, because it can become very predictable...
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Apr 25, 2005 9:44:06 GMT -5
I know....damn me for being trapped in this spiral of emoness
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