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Post by tleev on Mar 21, 2005 4:31:41 GMT -5
A moment of solitude A second of peace A break in the rhythm Is all that I need
To turn off these thoughts To brush them aside To be still for the moment To bring me alive
I arrive in my haven So serene and so calm Nothing much matters No cause for alarm
The music flows through me It’s all that I hear The beauty of the melody Is all I hold dear
Each note and each chord Flows through my brain A voice of an angel A lifetime away
The music ends gently With a final serenade I awake from my reverie And get on with my day
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Mar 21, 2005 9:30:26 GMT -5
ohhhh, I like that. Good work tleev
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Mar 24, 2005 8:51:37 GMT -5
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Manja
Freaks Of A Feather
Madder than a motherf***er
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Post by Manja on Mar 25, 2005 20:30:19 GMT -5
crazy stuff dude, i like it a lot, it's got a great rhythm to it and flows nicely, very easy to read and the meaning isn't messed up by the rhyme, really good stuff! ;D ;D
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Post by tleev on Mar 25, 2005 22:53:36 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Noone Special
Freaks Of A Feather
Don't Forget To Be The Way You Are
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Post by Noone Special on Mar 27, 2005 5:24:14 GMT -5
+1
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Post by funkymonkeygirl on Mar 27, 2005 23:32:54 GMT -5
Very simple, but also very very nice at the same time! I like it!
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