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Post by ..::~Sophie McWophie ~::... on Mar 10, 2005 6:48:03 GMT -5
This poem may offend or upset some people in some way if you read it... ok, this was written in a rather depressing stage i had, any criticism welcome... just dont slate it completely ok here it goes As she picks up the knife The Steal shines brightly glistening in the light she slowly runs her finger down the egde a trickle of blood emisses from from finger showing it's intimidating sharpness Tears in her eyes cloud her sight as she prepares for what comes next raising the blade she looks down as the flesh on her arm in penitrated a searing pain comes over her the tears start flowing harder she stops thinking about that past. As the blood emerges from her wrist she feels calm, relieved, tranquil as the knife falls to the floor Her minds blank but the tears are still there she stares at her wrist in complete silence for a moment the painful memories left she knows they will return, so she sits by herself waiting for that moment waiting til she can take them away again ok, i just want to say that i am sorry if anyone does get offended or upset by this poem... it was just a way i could express myself at the times of it all
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Post by finscar on Mar 10, 2005 22:03:24 GMT -5
i 'm worried alot about girls who slit their wrists & arms. it's becoming far too common for me. all these self-mutilation & depression are just too horrible.it's like there's no other way, like no one will understand, console them, listen to them, be there for them & all their hurts are so suppressed inside.and hurting themselves more makes them feel better. i wish these girls know that help is out there & know that it's not right for them to do this.to be rude enough, they might as well kill themselves instantly.i'm sorry . i know a couple of friends who do that. i always thought it's damn stupid for them to do that. it's just that it's so often that it made it look like a trend for some girls achieving some kind of status. until i realise that it is really a problem. my heart goes out to them. and no this is NOT criticism to anyone in particular here. i rest my case.
i still like how the words were put into expression. it's beautifully sad.
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Post by ..::~Sophie McWophie ~::... on Mar 11, 2005 11:36:11 GMT -5
thankyou... talking about it is a touchy subject for me, i dont like talking about my problems... yet i can write about it in poems. but yes thankyou though
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Mar 11, 2005 15:22:34 GMT -5
If that is an accurate discription of one who cuts themself *I'm too chicken to do it, not that I want to in the first place* then I see it as a control issue. You know you are going to receive pain from someone else, as your history repeats itself, so it looks like you want to be the one to control your pain. The only outlet you see for doing that is causing your pain in the first place. With that simple, twisted control, Your mind can go numb, along with other parts of you, because you are in control, and it feels safe. This is just my bent opinion having been in your saddness, but wearing a different bag of skin. I think the art in your poetry is a better gift to the world, than for you or anyone else for that matter, to add to the pain that already comes from living. Even if it only harms yourself. *I've shared my share of pain with the world, and all I receive was pain in turn. It's a terrible rut to be stuck in.* As the lyric goes "Take care of me, 'cuz I might be you." Hurting yourself like that, hurts more than you. I hope you have found some happiness.
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Post by ..::~Sophie McWophie ~::... on Mar 11, 2005 15:52:31 GMT -5
to that i don't know what to say you seemed to have summed it up in one... thankyou greatly
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Mar 11, 2005 16:55:14 GMT -5
made me cry, wasn't so long ago now i was there You know I'm always on msn to talk!
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Post by ..::~Sophie McWophie ~::... on Mar 11, 2005 20:10:07 GMT -5
thanks emma
*hugs*
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Post by Not logged on on Mar 13, 2005 0:21:21 GMT -5
to that i don't know what to say you seemed to have summed it up in one... thankyou greatly I'm sorry if what I said upset you. I have been told more than once that I'm very blunt. I guess it is a side effect from one of my own survival skills. If I need to figure something out, I try to look at it logically. Too much Star Trek, and Mr. Spock, growing up I reckon'. It's easier to solve the puzzle, by weighing your options. By the title of the poem, I understood it as "Let's talk about this poem." If I misunderstood, I'm sorry. If you want to continue, let me know. Peace and love out to you Sophie.
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Post by Blonde moment on Mar 13, 2005 0:25:42 GMT -5
Although Controversial subjects often cause Conversations, I must learn to reread things a bit more carefully.
I thought it was a "conversation" poem, hence the "Let's talk about..." Aye!
I think I need to dye my hair! hahaha
Sorry 'bout that,.
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Post by ..::~Sophie McWophie ~::... on Mar 13, 2005 10:16:33 GMT -5
I'm sorry if what I said upset you. I have been told more than once that I'm very blunt. I guess it is a side effect from one of my own survival skills. If I need to figure something out, I try to look at it logically. Too much Star Trek, and Mr. Spock, growing up I reckon'. It's easier to solve the puzzle, by weighing your options. By the title of the poem, I understood it as "Let's talk about this poem." If I misunderstood, I'm sorry. If you want to continue, let me know. Peace and love out to you Sophie. you never upset me... i just didnt know what to say by all means continue if u wish
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same guest different day
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Post by same guest different day on Mar 18, 2005 10:48:01 GMT -5
you never upset me... i just didnt know what to say by all means continue if u wish I'm glad to know I didn't upset you. If you don't mind my asking a question or two, *you do not have to respond, or you may pm me instead.* how old are you? And how long has it been? Having never experienced that type of control issue, I'm curious about it. Talking about it may or may not help you, and it may or may not help others who have walked in your shoes. Again you don't have to answer.
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Mar 21, 2005 9:37:38 GMT -5
I'm glad to know I didn't upset you. If you don't mind my asking a question or two, *you do not have to respond, or you may pm me instead.* how old are you? And how long has it been? Having never experienced that type of control issue, I'm curious about it. Talking about it may or may not help you, and it may or may not help others who have walked in your shoes. Again you don't have to answer. Just in case you didn't know, same guest is me. Peace and love out to you honey.
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Post by Reesethezebraman on Mar 28, 2005 15:09:00 GMT -5
hehe im new here cudnt be bothered loggin in lol. but i must say dis is a verry sad, yet lovely poem, yeh.
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