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Mar 1, 2005 15:41:51 GMT -5
Post by dot on Mar 1, 2005 15:41:51 GMT -5
Thumb to pointer finger Now it's done Obscure and not purfect You remind me of the sun Off shaped, due to my squinting Looking at something so bright and amazing Sends my soul a comforting thought that's blazing Wow, I think as I take a step back Twist the world around again, so black equals black And I see I see what is not truely there I see how much you truely do care I see as you see as you see me Let me stay here in this thought Let me feel that I found what I sought Let this day be forever true to my heart Let me again look forward to the day we start Exchanging DNA Exchanging glances Exchanging ideas mixed in with laughter The circle that is us Continues on Until the day we lose the sun
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Mar 1, 2005 15:52:49 GMT -5
Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Mar 1, 2005 15:52:49 GMT -5
i love the concept of it.
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Mar 11, 2005 12:57:40 GMT -5
Post by young argentinian girl on Mar 11, 2005 12:57:40 GMT -5
wow, dot you're so talented. I apreciatte that u are sharing these beautiful poems with us.
all the best to you. Cintia
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Mar 13, 2005 1:21:34 GMT -5
Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Mar 13, 2005 1:21:34 GMT -5
That's really good
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