zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
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Hope
Nov 26, 2004 22:21:26 GMT -5
Post by zillyjay on Nov 26, 2004 22:21:26 GMT -5
I wrote a crappy poem today. Here we go.
This wiry hope, it just won't die It doesn't matter how hard I try Teach me the art of giving up Turn out the light and make me stop Shatter my world and make me see That there is nothing left for me That my whole life was just a lie That I do have a right to cry There is no reason to pretend That I can fight until the end Cause though I always lose the game I go on playing all the same Self confidence is killing me Destroy the nonsense I believe Tell me that I'm not always right Asking for help might save my life
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Hope
Nov 27, 2004 10:32:09 GMT -5
Post by finscar on Nov 27, 2004 10:32:09 GMT -5
it's great. i like the idea that you put into it.
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zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
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Hope
Nov 27, 2004 11:02:05 GMT -5
Post by zillyjay on Nov 27, 2004 11:02:05 GMT -5
Thank you!!
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Hope
Nov 28, 2004 4:06:25 GMT -5
Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Nov 28, 2004 4:06:25 GMT -5
That's certainly not crappy... It's really good, I like it ;D
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Hope
Nov 29, 2004 13:08:26 GMT -5
Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Nov 29, 2004 13:08:26 GMT -5
i really like it ;D
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Hope
Dec 2, 2004 10:55:18 GMT -5
Post by camelianhermitcrab on Dec 2, 2004 10:55:18 GMT -5
If that was crappy, may we please see you brillant poems? ;D you have a great talent my dear.
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zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
Posts: 89
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Hope
Dec 2, 2004 12:23:57 GMT -5
Post by zillyjay on Dec 2, 2004 12:23:57 GMT -5
Thank you very much...
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Hope
Dec 8, 2004 10:01:35 GMT -5
Post by Angel on Dec 8, 2004 10:01:35 GMT -5
I really like this.
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