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Post by Sami. on Nov 14, 2004 0:34:14 GMT -5
well ask yourself, is this what you truly believe..
do you believe in what you are emoting this person/event to do?
to preach?
i think i understand what its about, the turmoils and uprisings
it seems chaotic in the way that it doesnt really know whether it is helping to enlighten itself or others...
does this help..dont take anything ive said to heart, after all it is only my opinion, and not a gauge on your talent
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Nov 14, 2004 1:01:03 GMT -5
The way I see it *now mind you this poem was written years ago* ... I believe we are all here to enlighten each other. Some folks know more things than others do. take the band for example, they "enlighten" us with their music. You write beautiful poetry, the bird in the window sings a lovely lullaby ... one ripple in the lake will eventually cross another ripple, creating more ripples ... um ok maybe now I'm rambling. Basically I believe we are all connected on this planet ... Maybe I should change it to "teach" and not "preach" . Thank you for your words of widsom
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Post by Sami. on Nov 14, 2004 1:12:36 GMT -5
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