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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Nov 10, 2004 12:27:04 GMT -5
I wrote this last night and its a little weird but i like it as i think it captures my emotions well, much better than my other pieces when i was obseesed with sticking to a set structure.
The scars are still there Like the Jews carry the hate of the Nazi's branded on their arms I too am branded by the hate of myself and the self denial of my sins An ugly time of silent loathing of the creature I'd become of bottled hate for what i was and would be as i begun Ever more twisted and warped by realitys sting and the cold bite of a knife in my skin Dark depression stole away my heart and slowly shreaded my happyness as I drifted unawarre of my bodys own tortured cries for help And so I carry the scars They claimed me and caught me unaware and now they serve as a reminder of what i turned my back on and of what will always be there
Three pale lines-almost naked to your eyes, forever etched in sorrow in mine.
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Post by camelianhermitcrab on Nov 10, 2004 16:14:25 GMT -5
tragically beautiful ...
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Post by HappyAsAPenis on Nov 10, 2004 17:42:19 GMT -5
very sad very beautiful
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Post by Swanflea on Nov 11, 2004 6:13:33 GMT -5
Indeed, very well written, but sad.
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Nov 11, 2004 12:56:27 GMT -5
thank you. You have no idea how much this means to me. I've not selfharmed for 4 months now and i just needed to vent the last bit of emotion i had there.
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Post by Nothing incorporated on Nov 11, 2004 13:13:09 GMT -5
probably the most stunning poem of this topic I have read. really captures the glint of emotion in this girls heart. truly depressingly amazing
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Nov 11, 2004 13:20:01 GMT -5
probably the most stunning poem of this topic I have read. really captures the glint of emotion in this girls heart. truly depressingly amazing hmmmmm and the fact you have an enormas crush on me didn't influence you ion that decission at all
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Post by finscar on Nov 12, 2004 8:23:22 GMT -5
woa..i love all your choices of words. you got talent.
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMeas guestP on Nov 12, 2004 14:39:49 GMT -5
woa..i love all your choices of words. you got talent. thank you but really its not that good
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