zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
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Post by zillyjay on Oct 16, 2004 20:28:59 GMT -5
This was actually meant to become a song, but as I haven't continued writing for a year or something, I guess it'll stay like it is. So I it's rather a poem now.
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Lost
She wants to live in yesterday You pull her back up on the way The fight is stopped but will not end The tying rope's still round your hands Don't waste your time come back to me You see her drowning in the sea
You want to break out of this cave She's in a wave now building graves She never wanted you to die You need the rope to save her life She’s still out there and you can see The saviors are your enemies
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It has absolutely nothing to do with water. It's more like three different ways of thinking about my situation at that time put into three personalities (you, she and the one who says it). I know, that's hard to understand.
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Oct 16, 2004 23:19:51 GMT -5
I am liking this very much so
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zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
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Post by zillyjay on Oct 17, 2004 8:00:28 GMT -5
Thank you!!
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Post by HappyAsAPenis on Oct 17, 2004 11:30:36 GMT -5
I likey. Lynn
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