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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Sept 30, 2004 14:48:35 GMT -5
The wailing from the road matches that of my soul Red and Blue lights in an empty hole A protective sheild for my helmeted heart In the name of Justice you ripped me apart
And now whats left of me Apart from the shell you see The siren on the rock dying with the tide With the sirens from the road wailing at her side
You tried to protect me but watched me die With a star on your banner at least you tried You drained my life with your high speed chase You shut your eyes as you closed my case
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Post by finscar on Oct 7, 2004 9:12:51 GMT -5
this poem is expressive in a dark and sad manner. i think it's about an accident but correct me if i am wrong. great words and beautiful to read.
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 7, 2004 12:20:13 GMT -5
Thanks. Actally it's not really about anything. i got called a siren in maths because this boy keeps talking to me and as i went to bed that night i heard a police siren and tied the two images together. However i think its nice to hear whatever people think of a song instead of what they're told to think
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Post by finscar on Oct 8, 2004 5:05:02 GMT -5
However i think its nice to hear whatever people think of a song instead of what they're told to think yes it's interesting.
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Oct 8, 2004 7:57:47 GMT -5
That's really good!!
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 8, 2004 13:07:10 GMT -5
this songs been up here for weeks and now everyone decides to post Thank you very much for your support and comments ;D
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Oct 9, 2004 7:49:17 GMT -5
this songs been up here for weeks and now everyone decides to post Thank you very much for your support and comments ;D I'd already read it, but I was at school when I did, with limited time left in the period or watever... so I couldn't post. But remembered a couple of days later and came and posted. I really like it ;D
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Post by eroticshock on Oct 9, 2004 8:34:04 GMT -5
that's good, reminds me of Dylan
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 9, 2004 8:58:25 GMT -5
thank you all so much for your comments ;D
:-*emma
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