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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Sept 29, 2004 13:12:49 GMT -5
Not finished yet, but here's what I have so far!
Self-Intitled Parade Injected into the shade The new colour we made Is slowly starting to fade If only you'd stayed If only
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Sept 29, 2004 14:15:17 GMT -5
I like it, keep going its really good
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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Sept 30, 2004 16:36:44 GMT -5
;D cheers! Am picking my brain for what else to write now
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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Oct 1, 2004 15:16:09 GMT -5
More Child that bore 7 mothers Did the same as all the others Did the same as all her brothers But now you see she slowly smothers If only you'd stayed If only
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 2, 2004 11:02:42 GMT -5
More Child that bore 7 mothers Did the same as all the others Did the same as all her brothers But now you see she slowly smothers If only you'd stayed If only It good, keep it going
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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Oct 3, 2004 15:54:31 GMT -5
Now he sways on top of the hill In his hands he hides a pill Something to keep his mind still To stop his heart from feeling ill If only I'd stayed If only END
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 4, 2004 11:41:19 GMT -5
yay!!!!! I think your first verse is definitly the best though
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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Oct 4, 2004 13:55:31 GMT -5
;Dyea, me too. I dreamt the 1st bit and tried to make up something I thought would go with it
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 5, 2004 12:26:04 GMT -5
oh god i have to keep paper by my bed because i keep waking up at 4 in the morning with insperation
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Post by Antaholics Anonymous on Oct 5, 2004 14:09:41 GMT -5
I know!! Same here! New end!! Catch the Pharoh in the sky Teach the new born girl to fly Stop the wind then let it cry Hold his soul, don't let it die in your parade Your self-entitled parade dunno which one I like better though
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Post by Best Member Ever aka Cristian. on Oct 5, 2004 16:29:59 GMT -5
I like your new version better
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 7, 2004 12:23:28 GMT -5
New version is definatly the best
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Post by RoRy"Fuzzysham" Frusciante on Oct 9, 2004 10:00:29 GMT -5
yeah i prefer the new version too
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