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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Sept 27, 2004 6:16:21 GMT -5
27/09/2004
I had shades Shades Shades of grey In this mistake Mistake Yeh, all I could take We had a little shake Up and now it’s all gone
She filled my heart Distant September Not much left to do Just remember
CHORUS: You’re my contender My sweet, soft pretender She’s my confessor Rockin’ all night My two-time professor Professor, my successor In the dawn
I had thoughts Thoughts Thoughts of calamity In this reality Reality Yeh, just like a pedigree We had a little electricity Between us now it’s all gone
She killed my head Virtual November Nothin’ left to do Now just undress her
CHORUS
Passed around a million times before Had four tequilas haven’t yet hit the floor Protestant my prodigy Scaling my delivery It’s never really done until it’s gone And it’s never really gone Until you’ve won it all
I had shades Shades Shades of grey In my intake Intake Yeh, it’s all I could shake We had a little take Out and now it’s been tossed
He billed the start Casual December Never be apart From the pressure
She filled my heart Modest October Not much left to do Sercombe to this pressure
CHORUS
My successor (x4) Listen to me My successor (x4) My ultimate pedigree My successor (x4) Will she let ya? My successor (x4) We’ve given in to our predecessors
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Post by Sunborn on Sept 29, 2004 3:05:33 GMT -5
great vocabulary josh. you are giving me a great sense of the time passing by, month by month.
i find it interesting how the grey shades blend with your choice of the months.
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Sept 29, 2004 6:35:54 GMT -5
That had nothing to do with it those months are pretty bright and hot here... except September, this one's been a bit grey... yeh.
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Post by Divs on Sept 29, 2004 14:24:27 GMT -5
well it's not about you now is it? once posted a poem means what I want it to mean so there no honestly josh, that's how i saw it. care to explain in more detail perhaps?
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Sept 30, 2004 0:04:40 GMT -5
It's just the flow... whatever words come out come out. A lot of stuff I write does have an initial meaning but gets lost, translated or changed along the way.
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Post by Sunborn on Sept 30, 2004 1:39:45 GMT -5
you mean you write just to write? you rhyme just to rhyme?
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Sept 30, 2004 6:41:16 GMT -5
i dunno... sometimes
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