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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 15, 2004 6:03:40 GMT -5
it's not finished yet
hysteria for the race of fire burning blood and twisting desire a soul aflame is the star of the night darkness is my guardian light
you gave me hope but it burnt my eyes A paridise with cloudy skies
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RHcp
Freaks Of A Feather
naked we come and bruised we go
Posts: 472
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Post by RHcp on Oct 15, 2004 6:12:12 GMT -5
It's good, I like it
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Oct 15, 2004 6:56:09 GMT -5
Yeh, can't wait to see the finished product
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 15, 2004 7:05:24 GMT -5
thanks ;D i still need to finish it tough which could take me a while :-*emma
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zillyjay
Mirror To The Moon
too many names
Posts: 89
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Post by zillyjay on Oct 16, 2004 20:33:08 GMT -5
I also like it.
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 18, 2004 13:29:35 GMT -5
argh creative slump i may just leave it at that, I've already got another song on the go thats pissing me off.
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Post by finscar on Oct 18, 2004 16:12:39 GMT -5
argh creative slump i may just leave it at that, I've already got another song on the go thats pissing me off. hey relax...take your time to finish this poem. your words are great...you are living me in suspense because of your unfinished product. think about it. lol.
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Post by HappyAsAPenis on Oct 18, 2004 18:21:01 GMT -5
It's good how it is. Sometimes u may have to just leave it alone for a while. Come back to it later. Good luck. Lynn
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 19, 2004 14:40:12 GMT -5
hey relax...take your time to finish this poem. your words are great...you are living me in suspense because of your unfinished product. think about it. lol. ::)I wrote this in one minute while i was on the toilet.......the more i think the worse my songs come out
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 20, 2004 14:34:30 GMT -5
bear with me people I'm halfway through the next verse and also one line away from the little shit of a poem i was talking about earlyer
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Post by finscar on Oct 20, 2004 21:47:32 GMT -5
::)I wrote this in one minute while i was on the toilet.......the more i think the worse my songs come out don worry i 'll wait.
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 22, 2004 14:56:40 GMT -5
one more line left....oh the suspence, and look out for angel which i'll be posting soon-hopefully finished
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Post by NobodyWeirdLikeMe on Oct 22, 2004 14:58:30 GMT -5
Yertle The Turtle the advanced bullshit wizard is a pain in the ass-i thought it was a pop-up and wondered why it wouldn't close. Then i paniked and thought it was a virus I'm so stupid ;D
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Post by Yertle_The_Turtle on Oct 23, 2004 6:06:36 GMT -5
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